Leaving something out by letting ego get in the way
Yesterday Tom Peters commented about a recent story he ran across in a newspaper. It was a quote from a local high school principal commenting on higher test scores on a standardized math test. The quote read:
"The significant jump is due to the hard work and dedication of our teachers and administrators - and is not the typical increase one would expect in a year."
I'll ask the same question Tom does: What is wrong with this quote? Do you see it - or rather, do you see what is missing?
The corrected version, as Tom points out, should read like this:
"The significant jump is due to the hard work and dedication of our students, teachers and administrators - and is not the typical increase one would expect in a year."
Many kudos to Tom for noticing this and bringing to the attention of his readers.
"The significant jump is due to the hard work and dedication of our teachers and administrators - and is not the typical increase one would expect in a year."
I'll ask the same question Tom does: What is wrong with this quote? Do you see it - or rather, do you see what is missing?
The corrected version, as Tom points out, should read like this:
"The significant jump is due to the hard work and dedication of our students, teachers and administrators - and is not the typical increase one would expect in a year."
Many kudos to Tom for noticing this and bringing to the attention of his readers.




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